yupsie lol another poem. this one I made really randomly. first sentence is rhyming while the rest just "goes" lol I don't know if you can do that.....but I did it anyway! but be honest and tell me what you think!
the wind blowing slightly as I lay under my favorite apple tree
blue sky's as far as I can see
I eat an apple and see my white fluffy kitten coming, meowing so cutely
she comes up and purrs, I pet her for a while.
as she falls asleep,
the warm wind drifting me to sleep as well
~Hannah~
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Friday, May 30, 2008
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no offense,but I didn't really like it. the only part I liked was the last verse. "the warm wind drifting me to sleep as well"
i thought it was cool but i dont know how to read and have it flow but i liked the words true artistic talent
lol Anonymous I can tell your Haley cause you said "no offence" lol
but thats your opinion if you didn't like it
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